I have developmentally edited over 41 fiction and nonfiction short stories and provided thorough feedback in the form of a letter to improve aspects of the writing, such as characters, setting, narrative, language, and more.
Hangman’s Fracture
This is an example of a freelance developmental editing letter for a nonfiction short story.
Atsikana! Girls!
This is an example of a freelance developmental editing letter for a short story to be entered into a writing contest in the author’s home country.